Writers are advised to always leave something for a week before going back and checking it over. Bugger that. Here's a poem I rattled out literally five minutes ago. I don't know whether it shows or not, but it is here, if you are interested. Be warned, it is a little dark.
By the way, if anyone feels like helping me out, I would be interested to see whether you think the poem is from the point of view of a man or a woman.
I feel much better now!